Examples of Descriptive Writing Using the 5 Senses

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What is Descriptive Writing?

Descriptive writing uses details and the five senses to describe a person, place, thing, or event. Proper word choice and the use of adjectives are very important for the reader to create a picture in their mind. Similes and onomatopoeia (sound words) are some other examples of descriptive writing.

Basic Sentence: The leaf fell off the tree.

Detailed Sentence: The yellow leaf fell off the big tree.

Descriptive Writing: SWOOSH! The smooth yellow leaf floated down from the enormous oak tree.

Using the 5 Senses

Using the five senses is one of the best ways to incorporate descriptive writing. Describing sight, smell, hearing, taste, and touch will enable the reader to envision the words and better understand the writing. Although it may be difficult to use all five senses, even just using a few will enhance the reader’s experience.

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Topics

It’s fun to choose one topic and describe it in depth. Look at the list below for some examples of descriptive writing ideas for kids to try.

  • Food– pumpkin pie, ice cream, hot chocolate
  • Animal– dog, bird, elephant
  • Season– winter, spring, summer, fall
  • Holiday– Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas
  • Place– zoo, island, school
  • Event– birthday, parade, sporting event

Examples

Winter by Mrs. Sutton

Cold harsh wind engulfs me like a tornado.

White fluffy snow falls from the sky.

WHOOSH! The sound of the sled as it races past.

The smell of logs burning in the fireplace.

Sweet hot cocoa hits my tongue.

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Autumn is Here by Mrs. Sutton

Bright vibrant red and yellow leaves.

The sound of leaves rustling in the wind.

Cool crisp air surrounds me.

The sweet smell of pumpkin pie as the warmth enters my mouth.

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2 Comments

  • SUMERA at 11:56 pm

    Hi Angela,
    This article was really helpful for me. Thank you so much for the best resources given.

    • Angela Sutton at 4:53 pm

      I’m so glad this information was useful and helpful. I really appreciate your feedback!

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